Frost Writing

On Monday 21 May it was really cold and frosty so we decided to use this as our writing motivation.

Room 10 had written about the rain recently so we looked at their work as examples.
Rain poetry - Free Verse

Once we had written our own sentences, we buddied up to create shared writing. The results have been posted below.

Well done everybody. It's great to see you so involved in our blog posts.

Mr Fitzsimons

Frost by Wil and Ryan H

This morning I went to my neighbours house with a bucket.  Why do I bring a bucket you ask?  Well my neighbours have a really old house, so old that the frost had melted throw the roof! Some of the ice melted on my head, it felt horrible.

Snow falls down like rain and it makes snow flakes.  I can imagine the grass all white.

FROST BY Olly, Micharia and Savannah

FROST
Frost is freezing cold. When you stand on the ice it crunches under your feet.    

When you touch something cold your hands will be sore.  On a frosty  day you will be very cold and some cats and dogs get very cold too.

Frost  is cold  it melts in your hands.  If you bring it inside it will go everywhere. If you put hot water on  cold glass like car windows it will smash.

Frost by Jordan & Sophie

Frost

This morning it was really cold and lots of cars were covered in ice. When your car is covered in ice you have to put cold water on the windows so they don't crack.  It is freezing!

I saw ice on the grass.

It was crunchy on the grass.

It was like a blank of piece of paper. 

It was white on the grass.

It was covered in ice and it was freezing. 

Frost by Lillie and Michelle

FROST

I got to school and the grass was covered in ice and I was freezing to bits.  It was hard as bricks.  It smelt like coca cola ice blocks.  It felt crunchy on my feet.  It's like the North Pole, very cold.

Frost by Jamie & Kody

Frost


This morning I got a surprise outside!  The fire had gone out!  Frost and fleas, it was as cold as ice and it is very very freezing!
              Do you like the frost?
                                            Do you?
                                                    Do you?

FROST by Jade and Jason

Frost
Frost is freeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzing!
Its as slippery as a banana.
Ice is everywhere . You can crack it.
Ice - Can you make my feet go numb?

Fost by Aretoula and Tameka

Frost

When I woke up I said "oh no it's so cold and it looks so freezing." The grass was white at my house. I couldn't see green. I was too cold to go to school but i had too.  My dog was cold too and she was shivering.

When I got out of bed it was so cold and when I went to the car their was ice all over it.  My mum had to get a bucket and put it on the car and it came off.  When I got in the car it was freezing.

Frost by Jack and Joseph

Frost

Frosts are cold on your feet - crush goes the ice.
Icy cold, slippery crunchy.
Blank like paper but cold.

Frost by Taonga and Ryan D

Today it was freezing.  Do you know how slippery it was? Today it was so cold that I could not feel my hands.

Frost by Tegan & Amber

Frost

When I was driving to school I saw a car coverd in slippery, cold ice.
When I was getting ready I saw our car and it looked like a blank piece of paper.

Frost By Sam and Abigail

FROST

Crunch, crunch, crunch.  Slide, slide, slide!  When there's a frost the grass goes crunch and you can't see out of your car window.  The frost is caused by the heavy dew and the clouds have so much water in them.  It feels slippery. Do you like frosts?  I do because it is so slippery. It's freezing.  Did you see it?  The grass was covered.

Room 14 Shields

Room 14 have been making shields to put in our class. Everybody in the class had to make one but it was going to be all about you.


On mine there is a picture of a computer, rugby ball, lego also a bike. Most of the shields are finished and hanging up.


We are proud of our shields and sharing something about ourselves with others.


By Sam

Mother's Day Hearts

This week Room 14 have been making Mother's Day things for Sunday. This is my one. 

Abigail.

Buddy class - First visit

Yesterday we had Room 4 at Room 14. We had lots of fun. We liked having them over to Room 14 and we hope they come back so we can do more stuff with you next time. It was a long way for you to come over to the over side of the school. We think it is cool to be in Room 4.
From Tameka and Jordan .